Venerable journal

Soda said:
im in the same boat, quite accurate
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some things I wrote, give me some advice if you want to, these are just some rough drafts
long ago the world was mostly ruled by 8 (maybe I'll add more later) variant human races (kind of like humans but not really humans) and they enslaved humans
they are: the clovermen, the cordmen, the xittermen, the foodmen, the trannymen, the kikemen, the blackmen, glowingmen (I wanted 10 but 8 seems fine)
humans are the smartest species, variant humans are close but they all have defects
the clovermen looked like regular humans, but their bodies were filled with clovers, like how hair grows on humans but it is everywhere on their bodies. they are far more arrogant than humans
the cordmen are purple colored and have a disfigured head. they are more selfish than humans.
the xittermen look like birds and are covered with feathers. they are far more extreme in their pursuit of freedom than regular humans.
the foodmen resemble humans, but they are larger and have disfigured heads. they are far more brutal and barbaric than regular humans
the trannymen resemble normal humans, but they have blue stripes on their body and their hair is pink. there are only male trannymen, they reproduce asexually.
the kikemen resemble humans, but they have a weird cap on their head, kind of like a mushroom cap, and they also have long noses. they are far more greedy than normal humans.
the blackmen are completely black humans with pitch black hair. they are far more aggressive and ignorant than regular humans.
the glowingmen are like humans that glow in the dark. they are very friendly and naive.

most notably the clovermen had the jak which decided fate in their possession (but they couldnt use it because they just couldnt okay)

however then a human immortal (he doesn't have eternal life chinese niggers just say that) named nathaniel higgers (who was later acknowledged with the title Genesis Soot Immortal Venerable) acquired it and became a rank 9 (I'll explain the power system later) cultivator and he set up an organization in the central region (shardee) called the Glycine Court to help humans overcome variant humans (successful)
few million years later...
jimbo a man not from this world gets transported to it (that's important) and he's the mc of the story
 
Soda said:
i like these concepts a lot but why are the glowniggers friendly
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They try to befriend you to backstab. I felt that would be obvious by their inspiration, so I didn't include it. In reality, the aspect they deviate in from humans would be their treachery
 
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